Now I have to be honest, I don't much like this cover. I've had plenty of covers I've not been keen on but I've kept my mouth shut about them. Mostly. This one - well - it just misses the mark for my story. I don't mean any disrespect to the artist, it must be very difficult to come up with covers that match author's expectations, BUT - this woman isn't Pepper. The guy isn't Alessandro. The gargoyle - well yep, he could just about be Eli. The artist has managed to get a building in the background that could be the supernatural museum - so that's a plus but it's the expressions on the models' faces that I dislike.
Nothing I can do. I'm stuck with it.
But I can't help but wonder if the cover puts people off trying the story. The story is quite funny. That doesn't come over in this cover. Is the blurb not attracting readers?
The
Rock
Desired by men
and women, Eli’s good looks make sexual conquest easy until he attends a party
at the Supernatural Museum, where they land him in deep trouble. He says no to
the wrong women, and his punishment is to learn the ultimate meaning of
loneliness.
The
Stone Maiden
Much to her
family’s disappointment, not only is Pepper single but she works a hard and
dirty job as an apprentice stonemason. Pepper loves bringing stone to life with
her chisel but struggles with the isolation that comes with being different.
Then there’s her attraction to her boss, Alessandro, who appears to prefer men.
When Eli materializes out of nowhere, Pepper can hardly believe her eyes. Now
she’s caught between a rock and a hard place.
The
Hard Place
His hands
hardened by years training to become a master stonemason, Alessandro is an
expert at his craft, but not in matters of the heart. A daily frustration when
he’s in hopelessly in love with Pepper and the man of his dreams has
disappeared. As Alessandro’s team begins to restore the Supernatural Museum,
he, Pepper and Eli are drawn into the building’s secrets and risk losing
everything they hold dear.
Maybe people don't want to read MMF stories with a gargoyle! LOL
I need more reviews. I need people who have read it to spread the word. I need to know if this story didn't work so that I can see where I went wrong.
I can offer two ecopies of Rocked to people who leave a comment. If you haven't read it and you'd like to, leave your email - disguised - and I'll send copies to two people. I can't offer more because of my contract but I'd love to hear why this one didn't succeed.